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	<title>Comments on: Hollyhock  Journal 9</title>
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	<description>New life in old age.</description>
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		<title>By: Peter Behr</title>
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		<dc:creator>Peter Behr</dc:creator>
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		<description>Nice writing! I like the self-aware theme of being the good student to impress the teacher. A motivator for good writing yet perhaps an impediment as well.
Great exercise to become the voice of others, to get past that need to self-express in the direct way and become the vessel for life. 
Not clear of your intention or commitment specifically in the writer&#039;s field: poetry, novel, chronicles?
Thanks for letting us in on your process.
PB</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice writing! I like the self-aware theme of being the good student to impress the teacher. A motivator for good writing yet perhaps an impediment as well.<br />
Great exercise to become the voice of others, to get past that need to self-express in the direct way and become the vessel for life.<br />
Not clear of your intention or commitment specifically in the writer&#8217;s field: poetry, novel, chronicles?<br />
Thanks for letting us in on your process.<br />
PB</p>
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